Chương 26: The Corridor Version
Please Stop Exploding, Fellow Disciples (I Shall Audit the Heavens B1) · R.D. Kennedy · 39 chương · ~14 phút đọc · Tạo 05/07/2026
By midmorning, the Healing Hall corridor had decided that Lin Zhihao could see through skin. This was not the first version. The first version belonged to the narrow-faced disciple, who had been made to sit on the left bench with both hands visible, and who told it this way: Lin had refused three times, and agreed only because a furnace attendant had looked ready to weep in public—which proved either that Lin was merciful or that the Healing Hall apprentice was terrifying.
The narrow-faced disciple preferred the second explanation. It fit the available evidence. The second version belonged to the furnace attendant with the stiff leg, and was the least popular, being accurate. Lin had not touched him. Had not circulated qi. Had made no gesture worth retelling.
He had asked where the pull began, where it went next, and whether the bad route changed when the attendant breathed lower—and then he had told him to stop pretending the limp was a stance, and the apprentice had written him two days off furnace-edge duty. The attendant repeated this to three gray-robed coworkers by the steam pipe, rubbing his thigh while he talked.
"So he reads the route," one said.
"No." The attendant pressed a thumb into his thigh.
"He makes you notice it." The others found that less impressive, and the attendant let them, and kept the rest for himself: how it had felt when the pull in his thigh finally had a name that was not weakness. The third version belonged to Gao Ren, who was trying to help.
"He can't see through skin," Gao told the two boys by the water jars.
"He just watches the part of you that's lying before you know you're lying." The boys stared at him. Gao realized too late that this had not improved anything.
"Not like that," he said, to their retreating backs. By the second dormitory row, the story held that Lin could hear false meridians through walls, that the apprentice healer had declared him medically irritating, and that Gao Ren's elbow had been formally identified as a junior conspirator in front of witnesses. The elbow detail survived every retelling. It had the sturdy shape of nonsense. Sui heard it outside Lower Furnace Three, from a boy carrying wash water.
He was waiting for Meng Jiao to finish insulting a replacement hinge, rack hook over one shoulder, ash on his cheek, while the boy delivered the dormitory edition with perfect confidence. The boy had not been there.
"Disciple Lin touches the air near your hand and says which bone is proud." Sui looked at him. The boy flushed.
"That's what I heard."
"Bones are not proud."
"Right."
"Go carry your water." The boy fled with it. Meng emerged from the furnace throat with a blackened bolt pinched in his tongs and read Sui's face.
"Bad?" Sui shifted the rack hook on his shoulder.
"Corridor talking."
"Always bad."
"Worse today. Lin." The tale has been taken without authorization; if you see it on Amazon, report the incident. Meng dropped the bolt into the sand tray, where it landed with a sound that made Sui's teeth ache, and stood for a while in one of his silences that felt like an unfinished instruction.
"They will ask him for the wrong thing," Meng said at last.
"Already did."
"He will answer with the better thing." Sui thought about the attendant's shoulders, how relief had restructured them after three small questions.
"That may be worse. Useful things spread." Meng picked the bolt back out of the sand and examined its stripped thread.
"Fire spreads." In the corridor, the apprentice healer discovered that making disciples sit where she could watch their hands had produced a line. She stood in the treatment-room doorway with a brush behind one ear and a cup of green medicine in one hand and informed the line, "This is not a clinic." Five disciples looked around the Healing Hall corridor, confused by the architecture.
"This is a clinic," the narrow-faced disciple said carefully.
"Not for ambition." Nobody left. The line had rules now, because Gao Ren had written them out after the apprentice threatened to apply medicine to his personality: No palm forms. No circulation. No demonstrations. No asking whether the method works for breakthrough pressure. No saying "just one quick check" —that last phrase banned after its sixth consecutive appearance in a lie.
And at the bottom, the rule that had made three disciples leave and two sit down harder: Anyone who hides a pill, burn, wrap, tremor, numbness, cough, or sponsor arrangement loses his place. Lin sat beside the low table with his wrapped wrist on a cushion, looking less like a man who could see through skin than like one of the apprentice healer's patients. He asked the same questions in the same level voice. Where does the pull begin. What happens before the pain. What changes if you stop trying to be impressive.
Most of them struggled hardest with the third. A clerk from the Outer Methods Office arrived before noon. The line noticed him before Lin did—conversations thinning, sleeves dropping over forearms, two boys who had been comparing pull locations discovering urgent business elsewhere. The clerk wore pale red trim and carried a folded request board, and bowed to the apprentice healer first.
"Outer Methods requests copies of all notes relating to provisional warning vocabulary."
"No," she said.
"For safety classification." Lin catalogued the phrase without looking up. Provisional warning vocabulary had already reached an office that issued request boards.
"They are patient notes."
"The subject of the notes concerns a potential method."
"The subjects of the notes are patients." The apprentice healer was outranked and did not seem to know it. Lin put the cup of green medicine at even odds of being thrown. The clerk adjusted his angle.
"The office wishes to prevent unsafe dissemination."
"Then leave." Gao Ren, holding the rule board, looked briefly delighted. Lin did not. He watched the clerk's eyes make one quiet pass down the corridor—counting faces, wraps, injuries, witnesses—before bowing out. A refused request was still a record. At the corridor's far end, half behind a pillar, stood Cao Minghe's apprentice. He carried nothing. Folded sleeves and a composed expression, present, observing. Lin met his eyes across the distance for one breath.
The apprentice gave a bow with nothing in it, and left, and nobody else appeared to have seen him at all. The corridor version changed again within the hour: Disciple Lin was defying Outer Methods. The apprentice healer was hiding a manual. Gao Ren had learned the first secret and was forbidden to use it. Pill Hall was watching.
The last version reached Lower Furnace Three by the afternoon vent clearing, where the young attendant with the stiff leg was holding an ash hook and listening to his shift captain read the note that had come up with him from Healing Hall— two days off furnace-edge duty —with a deepening frown.
"Healing Hall pulls furnace shifts now?" The attendant looked at the furnace mouth, where heat breathed steadily around the repaired baffle, and thought about a question someone had asked him that morning: where does the pull begin, before it becomes pain? No one in his life had ever asked him anything located before.
"Yes," he said. The shift captain stared at him. The attendant lowered his eyes. He did not take the answer back. By evening the story had grown legs, hands, teeth, and a title nobody could agree on—sect safety auditor, route reader, failure doctor, the one who makes the healers write more—and none of the titles mattered. Disciples were starting to ask what happened before pain. And several seniors, in several halls, were starting to ask who had told them they could.
